Monday, February 6, 2017

Feedback #2

TEACHER'S FEEDBACK #2 - IMPROVEMENT

  1. Change the order of the credits - 'written by' should be nearly the end of the film 
  2. Delete the word 'ACTOR' 
  3. Add more realistic sound effects

'WRITTEN BY' IS AT THE BACK 

WORD ACTOR DELETED


SOUND:
Breathing sound effect for the finish


Foot steps sound effect



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