1st Editing Feedback
Good editing shot here. Doesn't look like editing and it's a good continuing shot.
The shot is too dark and need to adjust lighting to make it brighter to be able to see the dance and not get confused of what's going on.
Good clear shot of dancing here can see the contrast between light and shadow in the same shot which create a thriller feeling.
Camera going in circle [360] interesting shot.
Good editing at the end.When she fall down it demonstrate a good thriller feeling also nice editing.
Good continuing shot and contrast colour of when MC opening the door.
Good editing of turning on lights cutting between close-up and full shot show.
Lighting is too dark need to make it brighter and light does not fit with the shot before so need to adjust lighting and colour.
Add something to the black screen. Planning on adding text and sound.
OTHER SUGGESTION:
- Suggest to add in more meaning of how it's a thriller
- Do a reverse camera - the reflection walks away or the real person walks away
- Add in music/sound
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