Feedback - Peer

1st EDITING FEEDBACK

WHAT IMPRESSED YOU:

• Camera shot when MC enters [continue shot]
• Circular shot
• Turning on lights
• Continue of shadow
• Dramatic camera angles (during dancing)
• Setting--> fence make it feels like prison
• Use of angle
• Dancing skills 
• Use of lighting
• Theme
• Message
• Camerawork

HOW COULD IT BE IMPROVED:

• Add more full body shot
• Beginning could be change
• Add more 'SURPRISE' 
• Help audience understand the story more
• Too much dancing-->how does it relate to Thriller
• Explain lighting 
• More light on characters
• Focus more characters
• Confuse of plot
• Dancing? SYMBOLISING 

WHAT DOES IT REMIND YOU OF:

• MV
• Black swan
• Step up
• La La Land
• Hush (horror effect)